VISION GRID SYSTEM: THE COMEBACK OF RYOMA TAKEDA

Chapter 583: Carrying the Burden



Chapter 583: Carrying the Burden

At the end of round six, the contrast between them becomes impossible to ignore.

There are bruises forming along Ryohei’s cheekbone, a swelling beginning at his right temple, a faint split at the edge of his lower lip.

The marks of combat are there. Yet none of them come from a clean, straight shot down the middle.

Every counter Hamakawa manages to land catches at an awkward angle; glancing across the temple, scraping along the jawline, thudding against the side of the head without ever snapping it back flush.

And whenever a hook lands solid on the side, it almost always comes in the middle of a trade. The damage Ryohei receives is real. But it is shared damage.

When the bell rings and they separate, Ryohei turns with shoulders still level, steps steady as he walks back to his corner.

He even flicks his glove at Hamakawa’s annoying supporters to provoke them.

“What happened? Why so quiet now?”

A few of them shout back immediately, faces flushed.

Ryohei shrugs. “Yeah, keep talking. I fight better when you do.”

The commentator lets out a half-laugh, half-groan as the camera catches it.

“Oh, come on. He’s taunting the crowd now? In the middle of a title fight?”

“That’s either supreme confidence or terrible decision-making.”

“Six hard rounds in, and he’s got enough breath left to argue with the audience. You don’t see that every night.”

But Hamakawa’s steps are heavier now. His shoulders dip slightly, not dramatically, but enough for trained eyes to notice. Each breath draws deeper. Each exhale lingers longer.

He lowers himself onto the stool a fraction slower than before. And the blue-corner team moves immediately.

One cornerman pulls the mouthpiece free while the cutman presses a cold iron briefly against the side of his head, more precaution than necessity. There’s no real swelling there, no cut to manage. His face is clean. But his body isn’t.

The bucket comes up and Hamakawa spits, then sucks in a long breath through his nose. It trembles slightly at the end.

“Arms up,” Narisawa orders.

They lift his elbows gently. The moment fingers press along his ribs, Hamakawa’s jaw tightens.

The cornerman kneads along the obliques, pressing into the tender spots where Ryohei’s hooks have been digging all night.

“Deep breath,” he says.

Hamakawa inhales, and it catches halfway.

His shoulders remain lowered, rising and falling heavily as water is poured over his chest and neck. Sweat runs down in steady lines.

His face may look composed under the lights. But the way he exhales tells the truth. The damage is buried deeper.

Narisawa crouches in front of him, but this time there is no sharp edge in his voice. He studies Hamakawa’s eyes first. The calculation is still there, but the fire has dimmed.

“Hey,” he says quietly. “Look at me. You’re still here. You’ve taken his best work. You’re still standing in front of him.”

Hamakawa looks up, and breathes through his nose, slower now.

“He’s trying to make you doubt.” Narisawa continues. “But don’t give him that. Remember who you are. You didn’t get here because you were flashy. You got here because you don’t bend.”

He squeezes Hamakawa’s knee once. “One round at a time. That’s all. You don’t need a miracle. You just need yourself.”

Around them, the arena continues to roar, but Narisawa’s voice stays steady.

“Lift your shoulders,” he says softly.

Hamakawa inhales again. This time, the breath goes a little deeper.

***

In the red corner, Hiroshi is already pressing a cold iron against the swelling at Ryohei’s right temple while Murakami dabs carefully at the split along the edge of his lower lip. A thin smear of blood stains the towel before it’s replaced with a clean one.

“Hold still,” Murakami mutters, applying petroleum along the cut to keep it from reopening.

Compared to Hamakawa, Ryohei’s face tells a rougher story. The cheekbone is puffed, and the temple slightly raised, the lip irritated and red.

But when Hiroshi’s fingers press lightly along his ribs and sternum, checking for hidden damage, Ryohei barely reacts. Nothing significant there, no deep wince, no guarded breath.

Hamakawa’s hooks have skimmed and clipped upstairs, but almost nothing meaningful has sunk into the body.

“Breathing’s good,” Hiroshi says quietly.

Ryohei nods once. His chest rises and falls steadily, sweat dripping from his chin. And in his eyes, the fire hasn’t dimmed at all. If anything, it burns brighter.

Sera crouches in front of him, calm as ever. “You’re still controlling it,” he says. “Even when it turns ugly, you’re deciding when it starts and when it ends.”

Ryohei listens, jaw relaxed around the mouthpiece.

“You’re ahead,” Sera continues. “And more importantly, you’ve shown the courage a champion needs. They questioned you. You answered. You stood there and traded. You shut them up.”

The crowd’s noise seeps in from beyond the ropes, still loud, still divided.

“You’ve proven you deserve the belt,” Sera finishes.

But Ryohei shakes his head slightly. “I don’t care about them anymore,” he says. “For now, I just want to prove it to that kid. I’m not just going to win this fight. When I go back to him, I want to say I carried the burden. That I met the expectation.”

He exhales once. “And honestly… meeting his expectation is harder than answering these people.”

For a moment, Sera simply studies him. Then he lets out a quiet chuckle. “Yeah, that’s just how he is.”

He leans in slightly. “But understand something. He expects more from you because he sees it. The potential.”

Sera taps lightly at Ryohei’s chest. “And you know he’s never wrong with his reading.”

***

The bell rings, and they rise with different burdens on their shoulders.

Hamakawa leaves his corner like a man fighting time. The fire is no longer wild. It is just stubborn, survival first, pride second.

He knows the score is slipping. Every step toward the center feels heavier than before, but he forces his legs forward anyway.

Across from him, Ryohei steps out carrying something else entirely.

It’s expectation. Not the noise of the arena, not the critics, but a promise. And despite wearing the belt around his waist, he positions himself like the challenger again.

He walks straight to the center and plants his feet. No circling this time, no pendulum. He anchors himself and waits.

The message is clear: Come take the belt from me.

Hamakawa doesn’t hesitate. If the champion won’t move, he will.

He surges forward with urgency, throwing in volume; sharp jabs, committed crosses, hooks aimed at the guard to break it apart.

His legs are still alive. His punches still carry weight. The body fatigue hasn’t dulled his hands.

Ryohei tightens up; high guard, compact elbows, minimal counters.

He blocks, rolls, and parries. He does not chase openings, does not bite on feints. He does not answer bait with ego.

From the outside, it looks different. His face is more marked; swollen temple, split lip, bruising under the eye. And now he’s defensive, almost passive.

And Hamakawa sees it as signs of damage building up.

“So you’re finally done, huh?” he thinks as he presses forward. “Can’t keep those legs swaying anymore?”

And the commentator shoots up. “Hamakawa’s sharpening his aggression! A left hook clips Ryohei clean on the side of the face. A straight right grazes the cheekbone more solidly than before.”

“He’s finally found his rhythm back,” the analyst says. “And for some reason, Ryohei hasn’t done much in this round. For some reason, he looks sluggish.”

Hamakawa’s supporters erupt. Even Narisawa’s eyes widen slightly.

“Come on, Hamakawa. You can still win this.”

“I beg you… take the belt back home.”

“We can’t afford another loss.”

“Not to that small gym.”

Hope creeps back into their section like oxygen returning to a suffocating room.

They just don’t realize they are breathing borrowed air. Because Ryohei is giving it to them.

It is deliberate, a trap he has tasted before in long sparring rounds with Ryoma. Being allowed to believe he was gaining ground, only to be broken when his rhythm emptied itself.

Ryohei waits, feeling the tempo rising in Hamakawa’s chest, feeling the urgency tightening his combinations, waiting for the slight hitch in the exhale.

Middle of the second minute, the cues is there. And Ryohei’s feet wake up.

A sharp step back, just enough to create daylight, making looks like retreat.

Hamakawa lunges after him. But Ryohei answers with fast, snapping jabs from range, high volume, disrupting pursuit.

“Ohh… they begin trading left hands in rhythm!”

“Jab for jab. Hook for hook. Hamakawa dips, inviting a counter!”

“But Ryohei refuses the invitation! His mind is clear!”

But gradually, Ryohei’s movement slows. The quick steps soften into that lazy sway, slower, and slower still.

Until he anchors again in the center, only lead foot sliding within a tight pocket of space.

“Come on,” he murmurs. “Let’s trade.”

Then he bursts forward; three lefts chained into two ripping right hooks.

Dug.Dug.Dug… DUGH! DUGH!

Hamakawa shells up tightly, absorbing the barrage, waiting for the inevitable opening at the end of the sequence.

When the combination dies, Hamakawa prepares to fire his counter. But it doesn’t come as Ryohei steps out already.

Ryohei is back to that small pendulum, barely moving, only lead foot gliding lazily as if exhaustion has finally claimed him too.

The illusion is perfect, and then, he widens his lead foot half a step, just half.

Hamakawa reads it as another entry cue, another pattern. He commits to the counter, this time fully.

And that is the mistake, because Ryohei has never done this before in this fight, something Hamakawa forgets to anticipate.

The moment Hamakawa loads up, Ryohei snaps his lead foot back to its original position and slips outside the line, letting the punch travels above his right shoulder.

He drives forward, and…

BAM!!!

The right glove detonates clean against Hamakawa’s face. Hamakawa’s head snaps back, sweat and red arc in the air.

“Oh, no!!!” the commentator screams, voice cracking in disbelief. “He walked straight into it!”

It is not a lucky punch. It is not the step-back trap. It is a slip-in counter; coiled, calculated, and loaded with everything that’s been burdening him this whole time.

Hamakawa’s legs stall, and then his body folds, crashing down onto the canvas beneath him.

The arena explodes into stunned silence before the roar can even form.


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