Scarecrow
Chapter 538: The Paper Everybody Reads
Pell Jorad’s column came out every Tuesday.
It had been that way since his second month on Caul, when Tamsin had come to him with a proposition and a cup of tea and the particular expression she wore when she knew she was about to ask someone something they would initially refuse. Pell was sitting in Hanne’s kitchen learning the words for the parts of a stile from a printed sheet, because that was how Pell approached anything he wanted to understand. He had a system, which was to start with the vocabulary and work outward.
Tamsin told him what she had in mind. Pell said he wasn’t a writer.
Tamsin said she knew. She said the people who weren’t writers were often the ones you wanted.
The first column was 400 words about the bean soup at the second-corner place, which he had eaten three times in a week without mentioning it to anyone. Hanne read it over breakfast and said he’d got the description of the place exactly right, and that was the first time Pell had ever been told he’d got something exactly right about anywhere, and you could see on his face what that meant.
By the time the column about the ferry terminus ran — the one about parents, the peripheral awareness they give to the world, the edges and the steps and the bags, with the line about how caring for things teaches you to see — subscriptions to the Herald had grown by four hundred thousand in a week.
Hanne: A Considered View. Tamsin: a man who watched everything because he was still learning where he was. The worlds were reading it because Pell was doing what all of them had done when they arrived, or what they wished they’d had time to do, and they recognised it.
The issue was: everyone wanted more.
Tamsin came to us on a Wednesday.
She had the particular quality of someone who had already thought through nine objections to her own proposal and had answers ready, which was her general approach to everything. She had been editing the Herald for years now — the floor of the Arch Hall with the nine presses and the three hundred people, the Reach edition printing at night on Marrach — and she had a very good sense of what the Reach wanted to read and what it needed to read and how much of each was advisable at any given moment.
She sat at the long table with Mother, which was always where the actual conversations happened.
She said: Pell’s column was the most-read thing in the Herald. More letters came in for Still Learning than for any other page, including the front. She had started receiving letters — a great many letters — asking whether there were other columns in progress, whether other people were writing, whether there were plans.
Mother poured tea without saying anything, which meant she was listening carefully.
Tamsin said: she had a list.
She slid it across the table.
Mother read it. She looked up at Tamsin. She said: “An advice column.”
“Yes,” Tamsin said.
A pause.
“Mine.”
“Yes.”
Mother picked up her cup. She looked at the window. She put the cup down.
“And the letters would be from anyone.”
“Within reason,” Tamsin said. “Questions about family, cooking, life. Questions about you and the Dasks, within reason. We’d put a notice in the paper two weeks before — tell people what it was for and that letters were welcome.”
“And I would answer them.”
“In your own words,” Tamsin said. “In however long you wanted. We’d print them whole.”
Mother sat very still for a moment, in the way she sat still when she was weighing something honestly. Not performing the weighing — actually doing it.
Then she said: “They’ll ask about Trevor.”
“Some of them will.” Tamsin didn’t look away. “You don’t have to answer those.”
“I know,” Mother said. “I would, though.” She picked up her cup. “Leave the notice for two weeks. I want to see what they ask.”
The notice ran on a Thursday. It was small, three lines at the bottom of page four: Letters to Dorothy Dask, in care of the Herald. Any question, any subject, within reason. First column in a fortnight.
By the following Monday the Herald had received forty thousand letters.
Tamsin sent someone to tell us. I was in the garden. Mother was reading on the bench.
She said: “How many?”
The young man said: “Forty thousand. As of this morning.”
Mother looked at her book. She closed it.
“I’ll need more tea,” she said.
She went through three hundred of them that first evening, at the kitchen table with her glasses on and a pot that Priya had sent over because Priya knew exactly when a situation required a good pot. She sorted them into piles. The piles were not random — she had a system, which was Mother all over. I sat in the other chair and read when she handed one to me.
The letters were extraordinary. They were from everywhere — from Hedge worlds and the worlds that had come in through Thale and Mira and the Firsts, and from the edge worlds, and from some that had no return address and came in careful handwriting through the thin bands. A woman on Kiln wrote about her daughter and the daughter’s husband, and the particular quality of grief that is not mourning because nobody died, only moved a long way away, and whether it was allowed to feel that way. A man on Caul wrote about how to make a stew that his wife had made for forty years, and the difficulty of getting it right without her there to correct him. Three separate letters asked about proper tea.
A child wrote: “My dad says you can carry things without it showing. Can you teach me that?”
Mother read that one twice. She set it in the pile she was taking with her to bed, which meant it would be in the first column.
“She’ll learn,” Mother said, to no one in particular. “Most things you learn by doing them.”
She answered twenty in the first column. She answered them whole and in order, and what she said about the stew was practical and exact, and what she said about the daughter was true in the way that true things are, and what she said to the child about carrying things without showing it was the longest answer, two full paragraphs, and Tamsin told me later that of all the columns they had ever printed, this was the one that caused the most people to write in simply to say thank you.
Subscriptions to the Herald went up by nine hundred thousand in the first month.
Sabeth came to Tamsin two weeks after Mother’s first column.
She had been thinking about it for some time, she said. She had a great deal to say about deepbacks that had never been written down in a form that people outside a research room could read, and the marine centre was new and needed people to understand what it was for, and she had always thought the gap between the people who studied things and the people who were simply curious about those things was an artificial gap that served nobody.
Tamsin said she would be very pleased to have a guest column.
Sabeth’s first guest column ran on a Friday, and it was about the deepbacks. Not the science of them first — she started, as she always started, with the grandmother. The one at the end of the southern arm on Ister, the one with five calves now, whose youngest had two of her own. She described the way the pod moved in the morning when the channel was cold, and what it meant when they turned before the shelf, and what the breathing-in was like from a boat. She wrote about Sabeth’s most used observation tool, which was patience, and how patience was a form of attention that most people forgot to bring. The science came in slowly, wound into the description of the pod the way good explanations do — not beside the thing but inside it.
By the following Thursday she was back at the Herald’s floor in the Arch Hall, because Tamsin had received four thousand letters asking for more.
She wrote about the Avalon pod for the second column. The grandmother with the amber ring to her eye. The young one that had come close to the boat. The shelf under the channel that explained the leftward turn, which Dory had found and which Sabeth described without naming what she had used to find it, only that “a very careful set of eyes discovered the feature” — which made Dory, when she read it at breakfast, look at her glass bird with an expression that was trying not to be pleased about the description and failing.
The third column, Sabeth wrote about the marine centre itself.
She described the building — the hull-shaped white stone, the walkway to the dock, the east window that caught the morning light. She described the Thursday seminar and the twelve students and what she asked them to do, which was to watch the same thing for long enough to understand what same meant. She described the winter course, The Deep Country, and the question at the bottom of everything, which was whether the two pods — the deepback pod on Ister and the ridge-backed pod on Avalon — shared something older than the world-jump, some habit carried forward through the dark.
She ended with the word Halvane had written on the sign: the country below the country you can see, where the full life is.
The Herald received twenty thousand letters after the third column. Most of them were from people who wanted to come.
That was when Tamsin went to the General.
She said she had been meaning to for some time. She had readers who wrote about military questions — not the war, not the Refined, but the practical things, the questions people had about the Standing and the Wing and what a rank meant and how a battery was organised and what the life was actually like, because most people’s understanding of it came from The Asker, which was excellent but was not, in every detail, technically accurate.
The General said he was not a writer.
Tamsin said she was aware of that and it didn’t matter.
He considered this for a moment.
He said: “Questions from readers.”
“Yes. Military in nature. Within reason.”
“Within reason,” he repeated.
“A few letters a week. I’d bring them to you. You’d answer. I’d write it down.”
He was quiet for a while. He looked at the window.
“You’d write it down,” he said.
“I’d have someone sit with you and write what you said.”
“Someone who doesn’t use a lot of words.”
“I’ll find you someone who takes notes very quietly,” Tamsin said.
He ran once a month. The first column answered a question about the difference between a rank and a billet, which the General answered in one sentence and then, apparently, stared at the wall for two minutes before adding a second sentence. The young man from the Herald who took notes described it as the most carefully considered two sentences he had ever transcribed. The column was very popular, particularly with young people who were thinking about the Wall.
Sabeth read every one. She said it sounded like him. That was her highest praise for a piece of writing.
Kwame Osei did not need to be persuaded.
Tamsin asked him about a fishing column on a Monday. Kwame said yes before she had finished the sentence and had a list of topics by that evening. He had been fishing since he could hold a rod, and had fished every sea on Ister and three of Avalon’s rivers and the glass-cave waters at the southern resort, and he had opinions, which he expressed with the particular warmth of a man who loved something deeply enough to be enthusiastic without being competitive about it.
The fishing column ran on Saturdays. It was the most cheerful thing in the paper. He wrote about technique and about waiting and about fish, and he wrote about the sea the way he felt it — as something you asked rather than something you conquered, which had always been his way with the ground as well. He wrote once about the whale-things in Avalon’s western sea, the pod that had made the fathers’ fishing boat difficult on that first lodge trip, and what it had meant to watch Liam and Sigmund in the water with the net. “There are things in the sea that are bigger than you and have as much right to be there, and the proper response is to cut the net and get out of their way.” Hanne printed it on a board in the third-corner restaurant. The Kasrai museum keeper, when she read it, sent a note to the Herald: He understands.
He wrote about teaching Lucas to fish on that first lodge trip, and the silver fish that was put back. He called the column Good Water.
Priya Lal had been cooking since before most people on Avalon had arrived.
She had fed the original cadet group from the kit-plate bowl in the early days, when there was nothing much to cook with and nothing much to cook, and she had made it good anyway, which was what Priya did. She had been feeding people on the plateau for years, and she had opinions about food the way people who have been hungry have opinions about food — deeply and with feeling.
Her husband Dov had suggested it, actually. He had come to Tamsin on a Thursday morning and said that Priya had something worth saying and that if Tamsin didn’t go and ask her about a column soon, the moment would pass, and Dov did not say that kind of thing without meaning it.
Tamsin went on Friday.
Priya said she would need a co-writer. She had someone in mind, which was Taveth, because Taveth had been cooking for nine thousand people at the Fours and had known his way around a large quantity of ingredients under pressure for years, and also because he was willing to admit when something hadn’t worked, which was rarer than it ought to be.
Taveth said yes without looking up from the pot.
Their column ran on Wednesdays. It was called The Second Cup, after the Ennet custom that the first cup was poured out for whoever wasn’t at the fire and the second was drunk — which Priya thought was the right way to think about cooking, which was always for someone, even when you were cooking alone.
The format was simple: a recipe each week, with notes. The notes were where it lived. Taveth’s notes were practical to the point of comedy — quantities measured by feel, times described as until it smells right, substitutions made with cheerful confidence — and Priya’s were the other kind, the ones about what you were actually doing when you cooked something, what it was for, who you were feeding, what it was like to have fed people when there wasn’t enough and what it was like now when there was. The two styles sat beside each other in a way that was, without trying to be, a portrait of the people who had made them.
The column about the first-winter stew — Priya’s recipe, with notes from both — received more letters than any other non-news item the Herald had ever printed.
It ran twelve weeks after Mother’s first advice column, and the subscription count had by then passed four million.
It was Sorrel who brought the question about the comics.
She had come to visit, as she did sometimes, and she had the particular quality she had when she was working something through — a sideways look, a moment of quiet, the way she set her cup down. She was at the age now when she knew what she thought and had learned how to say it, which was a good age. Dory had been the same at that age, though the route they’d taken to get there was different.
She said: “The people who draw the Asker — have they been asked?”
“Asked what?” I said.
“If they want to do more.” She turned her cup around. “A daily strip. Something short, every day. The Herald has the front for news and Rhun’s worlds page and the other columns. But a daily picture — something small and regular that everyone looks for — that’s different from a volume. It’s not the story. It’s just—” She thought about it. “A moment.”
She was right, actually. The Asker volumes were events — something you waited for, read in one sitting, and then reread. A daily strip would be something else: a habit. Something you reached for first. A different kind of comfort.
Tamsin had been thinking the same thing, as it turned out. She had been considering it for weeks and had not quite worked out how to approach the artists, who were on Ister and had a process and a sensibility and a particular understanding of when something was right and when it wasn’t.
She approached them anyway.
The artists were two sisters from the second city who had been drawing the Asker since volume three, when the original artist had given the work to them because she said they had understood something about the characters that she hadn’t managed to. What they understood was that the characters were real people, and you drew real people from the inside, not the outside. Their line work had a warmth to it that people recognised without knowing why.
They said yes immediately, with the condition that the daily strip was its own thing — not a summary of the volumes, not an episode, but a small separate life of its own, like a window rather than a chapter.
They called it The Morning.
It ran every day. It was two, sometimes three panels — four on Sundays. It showed the house, the family, the garden, the red glass, the kitchen, the bench, the east wall. It showed Mother and her teapot. It showed the small ones underfoot. It showed the General at a breakfast table in the wing, and Sabeth reading in her grey coat, and Pebble in the garden, and Pim on a stile. It showed, once, Dory at the red glass at dawn alone with the glass bird.
Dory held that one for a long time when she saw it. She didn’t say anything. She put it in her coat pocket.
The strip ran from the first Wednesday of the new month, and in the house nobody had told anyone it was starting, because it had been in the planning for some weeks and there had been a kind of unspoken agreement not to mention it, the way you didn’t mention something you were privately looking forward to too much.
Pim found it first. She brought the paper to breakfast without saying anything and put it in the middle of the table and went back to her seat. Luka looked. Then he went very still in the particular way he went still when he was trying not to show that something had affected him.
“That’s us,” he said.
“Yes,” Pim said.
The first strip was three panels: the east window in the early morning, with the light coming in flat and long. The table with two cups. And Mother at the window with her back to the reader, hands around her cup, looking at the light.
No words.
Rory came in from the workshop and saw the paper and sat down and looked at it for a long time without touching his breakfast. He said, eventually: “How did they know about the light.”
Nobody answered, because there was no answer except that the artists had been here, had sat in this room, had understood what the house was. The strip was not a copy of the house. It was a portrait of it, which is a different kind of accuracy — not what things look like but what they mean.
Dory held the paper with both hands. She didn’t say anything for a while.
Then she said: “They got the bird right.” She tipped the page so I could see: in the corner of the second panel, on the edge of the east window, there was the glass bird, and it was facing the light the way it always faced the light when the morning was clear.
She folded the page carefully along the original crease and put it in her coat pocket with the other one. She had two now.
The strip ran alongside three other daily comics that the Herald launched the same week — a gentle wordless strip about the walkers’ world that one of the walkers had been drawing for forty years; a comedy about two junior Standing soldiers on a cold post who had been trying to fix their kit’s water heater since what appeared to be the beginning of time; and a strip about the Lumi and her crew that Halvane’s nephew had pitched to Tamsin at a supper, which was extremely technically accurate about sailing and extremely inaccurate about everything else, and was for that reason very funny.
The comics section of the Herald became, within six weeks, the reason most people opened the paper first.
Imre had been watching all of this with great professional interest.
She came to Tamsin with a proposal in the third month, with her notebook and her long grey plait and the particular tone of someone who had thought the whole thing through and expected it to work but was prepared to be persuasive if necessary.
She wanted a Shopping in the Hedge guide.
Not a catalogue — she was clear about that. Not a list of prices and pages. A guide, in the way a good guide worked: informed by someone who actually knew what was worth having, with the particular delight of finding something excellent that you hadn’t known to look for. What to get from Kiln that wasn’t iron. The right tea from the second city’s market. The window in the Hyrrani valley that made the best glass cups. The family in Commonhold who made soft ones to order if you wrote to them, and what to say in the letter.
Tamsin said: “Every week?”
“Every other week,” Imre said. “Enough to anticipate.”
“The merchants will love you.”
“The right ones will,” Imre said, in a way that made it clear that the right ones were the ones she liked and the others were on their own.
The guide ran on alternate Fridays. Within two months, three shops in Commonhold had put As recommended by Imre Oshan in the Herald in their windows. One shop in the second city put it up without being recommended, and Imre wrote a column specifically about why you should not go to that shop, and they took the sign down.
The soft-one workshop on Ister — the one Imre had started, that made the stitched wool characters that were now the Hedge’s second biggest export — started listing new additions in the guide. The column where she announced the soft Pell Jorad had sold ninety thousand orders before the Herald edition was done printing. Pell read it over breakfast and went a colour Hanne had not seen on him before.
He recovered his composure and went back to his Stile vocabulary sheets.
The Senate meeting was called by Toby.
He had been Kiln’s senator for years and had not lost the particular quality he had always had of listening to things that weren’t being said yet — the breathing-in before the event. He had a committee now, the one that handled the question of what the Hedge said about itself across the worlds, and the committee had been watching what the Herald was doing for some months and had drawn some conclusions.
The session was on a Wednesday afternoon. I went with Corvan, because Corvan had asked if he could come and I had said yes. He sat in the gallery and watched with the expression he had when he was learning something by watching, which was a quieter version of the expression he had when he was learning something by being in it.
Toby presented the committee’s findings.
The Herald’s reach was now nine million subscriptions across the Reach, and growing. The band — Senna’s morning band — went further and carried the news, but the Herald was what people held in their hands, what they read at breakfast, what arrived with Imre’s recommendations and Mother’s advice and the daily comics. The Hedge had, without deciding to, built something that more people trusted than any broadcast the Collective ran.
Toby said: “The question is what else.”
A pause. The Senate chamber was high-ceilinged and domed, and sound moved in it in a particular way, so that a quiet sentence carried to the back without effort. Konrad had designed the acoustics deliberately. He said any hall where people argued should be built so that everyone could hear both sides clearly.
Toby said: “The Herald is a paper. People read it. What else can the Hedge offer that people will choose to watch, or listen to, or come back to? Not because we need them to — but because it’s good, and it exists, and it’s ours.”
He read from the committee’s list.
A miniseries from The Asker — the existing film had been seen on every Hedge world and many outside it; a serialised form would reach further. Televised sports: the leagues already had two billion people breathing in together at the Fours; most of them had no way to watch the weekly games. A weather programme across the worlds, with real prediction — Risa’s work gave them things the Collective’s forecasters couldn’t do. Local news channels, made on each world for that world, by people from that world. And a full broadcasting house, with original shows from anywhere in the Reach: the walkers’ songs, the Caddi salt-games, Hyrrani blade tutorials from Kyria’s students, the whole texture of the worlds that the Collective had always pretended didn’t exist.
Toby said: “Fifty-three worlds joined in one season to watch the Fours. They’d never seen Stile. They didn’t know what a stile was. They breathed in with two billion strangers. I’d like to know what else they’d choose to do if we gave them the choice.”
The vote was unanimous, with the Caddi grandmother nodding vigorously and the walkers’ senator, who communicated through a small translating box, sending the word the box rendered as of course.
The practical problem of making it all was not actually a practical problem, as it turned out.
The Aldri had been building screens and picture-transmission equipment for eleven thousand years. The university had a faculty that taught broadcast engineering, and the Thousands’ Doors had a studio where students trained. Halvane offered both without being asked, in the particular way he offered things that were obviously the right course of action — not as a gift but as a logical allocation of available resources.
“We have been talking to no one for eleven thousand years,” he said, at the planning session. “Now we have everyone to talk to. I’d like to do it properly.”
The Asker production house was already on Ister, and Isar Thenn had been asking Imre for two years when the second film was coming. Imre told him it was coming in another form, and he had asked what form, and she had said a serialised one, and he had sat down on the nearest available surface and been quiet for a moment.
The sports broadcast was the simplest: cameras at the fields and halls and the ridge path and the Long Way course. Hanne already had three people who had been writing up match reports for the Herald, and one of them turned out to be a natural broadcaster, which is a different skill from writing but related, and which you discovered by listening to someone describe a stile-climb and knowing whether you could hear it in your head.
The weather channel for the worlds across the Reach was Risa’s.
Tamsin had asked about it carefully, because Risa was not someone you approached about her work without knowing what you were asking. Risa had listened, and thought, and said she would want it done a particular way, which was that the forecast would be honest and explain the reasoning and not simply state the outcome. She felt strongly about this. The kind of weather they were dealing with was not the kind you could predict with complete confidence, and she thought people deserved to know when the confidence was lower. She wanted viewers to understand that weather was a thing that moved, that responded, that had its own logic, and that the people reading the forecast were people who respected it.
Tamsin said yes to all of this.
The first weather programme was twenty minutes long and ran twice a day for nine worlds. Risa appeared once, at the end, to explain a storm system off one of the northern moons, and what she said was brief and exact and left the viewer feeling that they understood something they had not understood before. She was not on again for two weeks, by her own preference, but the letters she received were extraordinary.
The local news was slower, because it had to grow from each world in its own form. But the Senate had voted a structure for it — not a central structure imposed from above, but a set of questions: what does your world want to know today, what happened, what matters, who can say so. The first local news broadcast on Hesk came from a former miner and a retired teacher who had been writing letters to the Herald for two years and knew exactly what their world wanted to hear. The first one on Caul was fronted by Pell, who was asked by Hanne and said yes immediately, then spent three hours the night before reading the vocabulary of broadcast journalism from a list he had made himself.
The house found out about all of this in stages, as things in the house were always found out about — in pieces, at breakfast and supper and over tea, in the particular way that large news arrived when the people receiving it were busy doing other things.
Luka found out about the Asker series from Sorrel and immediately went to find the door Hanne had left in the east wing for visiting children, which was locked because Hanne had gone home, and stood in front of it for a while.
Kesh, hearing about the Ring broadcast, said: “When?” in a tone that made everyone at the table look up.
Rory heard about the daily comics and sat very still for a moment and then went and planed something in the workshop, which was his version of being moved.
Okafor sat at the back of the Senate session. She had come without telling anyone she was coming, in the quiet coat, and she sat in the gallery with her arms folded and listened. At the end, when Toby had finished, she was quiet for a moment. Then she looked at Corvan beside her.
“Fifty-three worlds,” she said.
“Yes,” Corvan said.
She looked at the dome. She looked at Toby on the floor below, who was accepting the unanimous vote with the particular expression he had when something had gone well and he was not going to perform the fact that it had.
“This is how it starts,” Okafor said.
She didn’t say how what started. She didn’t need to.
The stars said Not yet this morning. 1,109. N.
The Herald put the marine count on the front page this week. Sabeth sent a note: “Thank you. Keep the number accurate.”
Mother’s column: letters still coming.
Days 13851–13920. The Paper Everybody Reads. Pell Jorad’s column grew to become the Herald’s most-read piece; Tamsin approached Mother about an advice column, and after a fortnight’s notice the Herald received forty thousand letters. Mother’s column ran, then Sabeth’s deepback guest columns, then the General’s military questions column, then Kwame Osei’s Good Water fishing column and Priya Lal and Taveth’s The Second Cup cooking column. The Asker’s artists began a daily strip called The Morning, with three other daily comics launching alongside it. Imre Oshan launched her Shopping in the Hedge guide. The Senate, on Toby’s proposal, voted unanimously to expand the Hedge’s broadcasting — a miniseries of the Asker, televised sports, Risa’s weather channel, local news from every world, and a full house of original programming from across the Reach.
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