Naruto: Starting by Reading Minds in Naruto
Chapter 28: Land
Kagetsu, the inn. Rain had passed before dawn, leaving the road dark and the inn's wooden eaves dripping at slow, regular, quiet intervals.
"By this reading, Asuma's headed for the capital, and he'll likely stay there a while once he arrives."
Tonbo had come prepared for the question, and pulled out a map of the Land of Fire, a winding line already marked between Kagetsu and the capital.
Iruka and the others leaned in, impressed despite themselves. They'd only confirmed that Asuma had passed through here. Their captain had already worked out where he was headed.
Tessen Togekei, sharper than the other two, caught the gap first. "Why the capital, specifically, Captain?"
Everyone had gathered roughly the same information. If their captain could read a destination out of it, there had to be a method worth learning.
Tonbo had been waiting for exactly that question, and answered with visible satisfaction. "First — anyone acting with intent has a reason behind it. No exceptions."
The three nodded along.
"Second — Lord Third told us Asuma is looking for his 'king': the person or purpose he most wants to protect. Mine, as your captain, is the Village, my father, my fiancée, and the three of you. Asuma hasn't found his yet, which is why he's out looking. It's the same for all of you—don't assume you already know your answer. You'll recognize it when you find it. Chances are you haven't yet."
More nodding.
"Third — psychology, plus what we already know. His range is limited to the Land of Fire, and confused people gravitate toward crowds — the herd effect. He's also moving away from Konoha, because an argument with his father is the likeliest reason someone runs. Running from a fight usually means running from wherever the fight happened."
"So leaving home after an argument means moving away from where the family is?" Tessen Togekei asked.
"Exactly right." Tonbo looked genuinely pleased. "By probability, there's about an 85.6 percent chance he takes this route."
"Not a hundred?" Iruka blurted, leaning in over the map. "And where does the .6 come from, exactly?"
"It's the most likely path, that's all. When you don't know exactly where a target is, you use what you do know to narrow it down to the most probable direction. That's the whole method. Go over it again once we're back, and next time, one of you does the analysis instead of me."
The three nodded, absorbing it properly this time — so this was what all that math and psychology from the Academy had actually been for. Tonbo's grasp of it left a real impression on them, and they spent that night replaying his reasoning in their heads, each privately resolving to read a situation the way he did someday.
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"He really is something," Iruka murmured to himself, lying on his bed, thoroughly won over. He decided, quietly, that this was the kind of shinobi he wanted to become.
Kagetsu's gate, the next morning.
They set off again, banter mixed with lessons the whole way. With Asuma's likely route already mapped, their work sharpened — at every town, Tonbo sent the three out to confirm the trail, then walked them through how to read whatever they brought back.
Each new piece of intelligence lined up with his analysis. Asuma really was moving exactly where Tonbo had said he would, and the team's admiration only deepened for it. Their own effort sharpened to match.
Watching the three of them improve day by day, Tonbo allowed himself a small smile.
Konoha jōnin, someday, all three of them — maybe.
His real purpose on this mission had always been their development, whether that meant intelligence work, chakra control, or simply learning to read a stranger's habits from a handful of scattered clues, and not the search itself. As for Asuma, Tonbo wasn't the only one looking — he doubted the Third had left something this personal to one genin squad alone, and the future he dimly remembered ended with Asuma returning safely after learning a technique or two from the Fire Temple. There was no reason to rush any of it.
If all three of his genin made jōnin eventually, that was three more shinobi standing between Konoha and whatever Akatsuki eventually brought to its door, whenever that day finally came. More strength in the Village meant more safety for everyone in it, his own family included, and that mattered more to him now than it once had, back when he'd had only himself to worry about.
Worth the patience.
"My king. What am I truly trying to protect?"
In a tavern in Kirikoshi Town, a lean-faced young man named Asuma worked through a cigarette, coughing on the smoke now and then, his expression somewhere between lost and irritated.
"Drinking alone, kid? Come sit with us."
A handful of men in white suits, faces set hard, looked him over with plain intent.
"Not interested. Leave me be."
Asuma set his cigarette down and stared them off.
The men traded glances, then produced watermelon knives, an iron rod, a mace — the sort of hardware that made their intentions clear enough.
"Buy us a round and we'll forget the disrespect. Otherwise, you'll regret it," their leader said, grinning.
Finger blades slid free along Asuma's hand. He wasn't in the mood to talk his way out of this.
At a nearby table, a young monk watched the scene unfold and rose, walking over unhurried.
"Gentlemen, if you'd be so kind — spare this one, for my sake."
The men moved to swing at him first, rods half-raised, until they registered his robes and stopped cold.
They exchanged another look, and the leader threw one last glare at Asuma. "Lucky for you an elder from the Fire Temple stepped in."
Then they filed out.
Asuma put his blades away. "Thanks."
"No need. You'd have handled them fine without me." The monk smiled. "Chiriku. And you?"
"Asuma."
"Something's weighing on you, I think."
"You're a monk—answer me this. How do you know who your 'king' is?"
Asuma's eyes were still clouded when he asked it.
"I couldn't tell you," Chiriku said, smiling still. "But I know you'll never find it sitting still. My teacher used to say — if your heart's troubled, go out and live a little. Take the road somewhere. Eventually it finds you."
The words caught Asuma off guard, more than he wanted to let on to a stranger he'd known for all of five minutes.
He'd left Konoha in a hurry with some vague notion of exactly that — going somewhere, anywhere, with more people in it than the Village he'd grown up in. Chiriku's words gave the impulse a shape. The Fire Temple was the Land of Fire's other great institution besides Konoha itself. Maybe there was more to learn there than he'd expected.
"Any advice, then?" Asuma asked, an idea already forming.
Chiriku smiled wider. "You're a shinobi, aren't you? I'm on my way to join the Guardian Twelve, to protect the daimyō. Might be worth considering."
Whether Asuma passed whatever screening the Land of Fire required was, at that point, entirely beside him.
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