Writers request

Hey everyone! I’m currently writing a novel called My Dao to Eternity, and I’ve posted up to Chapter 226 so far.

This is my first novel, and I’d honestly really appreciate some genuine feedback from other readers. I have a story and world in my head that I’m trying to bring to life, but I’d like to know how it actually comes across to someone reading it.

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What do you think of the story so far? How do you feel about the characters, world-building, cultivation system, pacing, and overall writing?

Please be honest. I’m not just looking for compliments—I’d genuinely like to know what you think could be improved or what you feel isn’t working. If there’s something I could do to make the novel better, I’d really appreciate hearing it.

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to read it and give me their opinion. It would genuinely help me improve as a writer.