Novel Full Chapter 167: The Crypt
Chapter 167: The Crypt
Tetsuya came out of print and began to bring jinchuriki out of trance.
The first was Kushina.
Opening her eyes, the girl stretched on the spot – Yes, you were right, I became stronger with the updated seal, though not by much. –
– Have I ever deceived you? Tetsuya smiled back with a squint
– No. – Kushina grinned, walked up to the guy, and pressed her pert breasts to his back. – T~e~tsu~I – she intoned the name of her beloved and asked in a quiet playful voice – They won’t wake up without your command, right? –
Meanwhile, her hands reached for his groin. The guy’s penis needed only the slightest hint of impending intercourse to stand at attention and pull up his pants to the limit.
Tetsuya himself was surprised by this arrangement. Instantly, with the help of one technique, the penis went limp, and the hands intercepted Kushina’s handles on the way to the groin – Kami, where did that little inexperienced girl who blushed from the word ‘dick’ go? –
Kushina tsked with displeasure when she was prevented from reaching for the charm, but she was not discouraged – This little girl was kicked out of this body by your huge merciless penis and your passion. –
“So it’s all my fault?” –
– of course. –
– There is some truth in this. – he thought, and then, turning his head, bent down to the girl’s ear and whispered – But still it seems to me that the updated seal is also to blame for this. Well, it turns out it’s also my fault that I didn’t catch up with this temporary side effect, which for some reason only affected you… I’ll have to satisfy you. –
A tree clone appeared next to Tetsuya’s body.
Kushina grinned – That’s how you say it, but I don’t hear fatigue or lack of motivation in your voice. –
Tetsuya grinned and, under Kushina’s squeak, slightly bit her ear – I just resigned myself. –
Having finished this, he, along with the girl, disappeared, leaving the remaining work for the clone.
The clone began to slowly bring everyone out of the trance.
Choumei was next after Kushina.
When the little rhinoceros beetle woke up, he quickly ran up to the clone’s feet and stared at him with his beady eyes.
Tetsuya, like his clone, did not forget about Choumei’s request, and therefore Rinne-Sharingan was activated. Then, under the joyful squeak of biju, the rhinoceros beetle regained its strength, got a pair of wings, and also regained the ability to speak normally. –
– thanks. – he said happily as soon as he found his voice – Can you now return me to where you took me from? –
– No problem. – the clone nodded and moved Choumei to the very cave that was not far from Takigakure
Then came Bee. The guy has changed a lot since their last meeting. In five years, the guy has gained impressive musculature, and also stretched out well in height, being only a head shorter than Tetsui, and this is at the age of ten.
Coming out of the trance, Bi first of all closed his eyes for a few seconds, and then clenched his fists and smiled, said – Bro, you were right, Hachibi changed his temper. –
The clone smiled – I told you that he would become more open to dialogue. Okay, enough about Hachibi, how are you feeling? –
– Everything is fine! – showed Bee a thumbs–up – Even better than fine! I’ve never felt so good before! –
– I’m glad to hear that. – the clone smiled
Then everything went at the same pace.
The clone gradually brought all the jinchuriki out of trance, examined them, interviewed them and returned them to his Kage.
When that was done, he began to study the Heroic Water that he borrowed from Takigakure.
The study did not last long, thanks to Rinne-Sharingan, the Eyes of the Emperor and the Imperial Zone.
This Heroic Water was the condensed chakra that produced that huge tree in their village. The most interesting thing is that this water significantly increased the activity of cells in the body, which led to accelerated chakra production, increased regeneration and a decrease in life expectancy, which is logical.
Tetsuya could not improve this water, but he could create something similar and better. The clone was able to make similar water already from his chakra, although it did not affect him much, but for other people it will show its full potential.
The water from Tetsui, at least several times stronger, improved the same indicators as the Heroic Water, but also had additional properties.
For example, a drinker could use all natural transformations, and if talent allowed, they would touch the improved genome and even the expanded genome.
And of course it was not without its drawbacks. Heroic Water could kill weak unprepared Shinobi, Tetsui water could kill even jonin if he had a poorly developed chakra circulation system and the chakra hearth itself.
But this disadvantage was leveled by the too good properties of this water. Therefore, Tetsuya called this water “Imperial Water”. Of course, it was possible to call it Divine Water, but he thought for the future, maybe it would be possible to improve this badyaga, then a new name would be useful.
In addition to water, the clone also began to design a seal to absorb part of the chakra of all biju and Hagoromo genes. Tetsuya only needs a drop of chakra from all the tailed ones in order to absorb the chakra of Kaguya in addition to absorbing the chakra of Jubi.
This will not negatively affect the rebirth of the Hare Goddess, and even on the contrary will reduce the amount of necessary chakra for rebirth.
When he finished designing the seal, he began to improve the fuin that Hagoromo had given him. Still, it’s really better to be safe and just in case improve this seal and make a few other fuin for a possible fight with Kaguya.
Meanwhile, while the clone was doing research and designing seals, the original finished satisfying Kushin. More precisely, not only Kushina, because under her moans, Tsunade and Mito were also wound up, and in the end it all turned into a group. It took quite a long time, because women also became stronger and more resilient.
– “I need to come up with something, otherwise soon I won’t even have time to train…” – Tetsuya thought, getting out of the warm female embrace – “Can I design a time barrier? Not a bad idea, and it will be useful in training and in bed pleasures… You can also start using the chakra and increase their sensitivity during intercourse… The main thing is not to overdo it, so that their heart does not stop from joy… Okay, I’ll leave the last one as a last resort.” –
After washing and dressing, Tetsuya headed to the burial place of Hagoromo.
The funny thing is that it was in Konoha.
A few moments later, Tetsuya found himself on the mountain where the Hokage’s faces were carved.
Deep in this mountain was Hagoromo’s crypt and Tetsuya hoped that it was in good enough condition.
With the help of technology, he plunged underground and “floated” towards the alleged burial site.
After a while, he fell into a small room.
The walls were covered with seals and frescoes.
In the center of the room, on a stone pedestal, the corpse of Hagoromo Ootsutsuki lay quietly to himself.
Surprisingly, this pedestal, or rather the seals on it, stopped the decomposition of the body.
– Great. Tetsuya smiled and went over and took some blood and tissues from the corpse.
Of course there were traps in the room, but Tetsuya easily bypassed them without hitting them at all.
Then he returned to the shelter with the help of hiraishin, and there he was already waiting for a ready seal and Heroic Water.
The Imperial Water that he created does not affect the creator himself, but the Heroic Water could benefit him. More precisely, Tetsuya assumed that if he absorbed it with the help of the seal, it would also increase the activity of his cells, which would lead to an improvement in the already rapid regeneration and accelerated replenishment of the chakra.
Having taken the necessary seal, he began the ‘ritual”.
Heroic Water and Hagoromo fabrics soared, and nine small multicolored balls with chakra burst out of the Evil Seal.
First came the Heroic Water, it split into the smallest components and entered Tetsui’s body through the pores.
Then the same fate awaited Hagoromo’s tissues and his blood.
At the end, nine balls from the chakra entered Tetsuya’s body.
Well, then the main part of the ritual began, which lasted until the evening.
When the seal went out and marked the end of the ritual, Tetsuya opened his eyes and said – Notifications. –
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Attention!
The user has taken over the genes of Hagoromo Ootsutsuki!
The pedigree of “Ootsutsuki” has been updated!
Attention!
Your chakra has reacted with the chakra of the “Nine Tailed Beasts”!
Congratulations!
Your chakra has merged with Jubi’s chakra!
Attention!
Your body has merged with the “Hero Water” from Takigakure!
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– Status. –
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Status
Specifications
Power – 330 → 370
Dexterity – 350 → 400
Perception – 440 → 470
Endurance – 500 → 650
Mind – 350 → 400
Spirit – 480 → 600
Talents
Fuinjutsu is a Divine Talent
Senjutsu is a Divine Talent
Seishitsuhenka – Divine Talent
Onmyeton is a Divine Talent
Pain Tolerance is A Divine Talent
Energy Control Is A Divine Talent
Massage Is A Divine Talent
Taijutsu is a Divine Talent
Cooking Is A Divine Talent
Sensorics Is A Divine Talent
Stealth Is A Royal Talent
Ninjutsu is a Divine Talent
Irenjutsu is a Divine Talent
Genjutsu is a Divine Talent
Alchemy Is A Divine Talent
Rinnegan is a Divine Talent
Abilities
Gamer’s Body
The Player’s Mind
The Emperor’s Eyes
Imperial Zone
Orgasm School
Arbitrary Meditation
Thunderstorm of the Undead
Overwhelming Undead Field
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– Now I’m definitely ready for Kaguya’s rebirth. Tetsuya nodded with a slight smile, clearly pleased with his improvement. He felt his body cells become four times more active, which increased his already incredible regeneration and the rate of chakra replenishment.
Rinne-Sharingan also became a little stronger and acquired a more majestic deep scarlet color.
Tetsuya’s appearance has hardly changed, except for the fact that he has become more beautiful again, and his skin has acquired a slightly pale shade.
Concentrating, he sensed Kuro Zetsu’s location. He was now on the border of the land of Water.
A shadow separated from Tetsuya in the Limbo world and teleported to a place that was very close to Zetsu. Since Tetsuya had been there before, the shadow could freely move there without any seals.
When the shadow teleported, Tetsuya just swapped places with the shadow, and then spread it.
Now there were several hundred meters to go to Zetsu, which, however, he crossed in a few moments.
– Kuro. Tetsuya said calmly, being behind the humanoid’s back
Zetsu got scared and jumped slightly. He wanted to complain about the fact that “if he were a man, his heart would definitely burst,” but froze as soon as he felt Tetsui’s chakra and saw his external changes.
Pleased with Kuro’s reaction, Tetsuya, with a smile and a narrowed, satisfied look, said – It’s time to revive Kaguya. –
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<figure data-hvi=”true” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-did=”23106896105187400″></figure><a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23106896105187400″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23106896105187400″></a><small>6mth</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>91<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23106896105187400″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23106896105187400″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>28</a><a title=”TFH” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”2410403992″ href=”/profile/2410403992?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”TFH”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>TFHLv6<svg></image></svg><a title=”TFH” href=”/profile/2410403992?appId=10″>TFH</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>this is a translation. pls add the site where we can find the raws. plus mentioning who the author is and that you are translating it. otherwise. youbare stealing the authors work
<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23237947905213300″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23237947905213300″></a><small>5mth</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>14<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23237947905213300″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23237947905213300″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>2</a><a title=”Dr200″ data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”4320004684″ href=”/profile/4320004684?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”Dr200″><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>Dr200Lv2<svg></image></svg><a title=”Dr200″ href=”/profile/4320004684?appId=10″>Dr200</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>The name is journey through the universe but he doesn’t leave the world he’s in so you should change the name
<a title=”Reply” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23347688705020000″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23347688705020000″></a><small>5mth</small><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path d=”M22 18V8h-6V2h-4l-6 8v12h12a4 4 0 004-4zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M14 10V4h-1l-5 6.667V20h10a2 2 0 002-2v-8h-6zm8-2v10a4 4 0 01-4 4H6V10l6-8h4v6h6zM4 10H2v12h2V10z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>9<a title=”Review detail” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_reviews” data-report-uiname=”reviews” data-report-dt=”commentsdetail” data-report-did=”23347688705020000″ href=”/review/23102006005984205/review_detail/23347688705020000″><button type=”button”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”20″ height=”20″><path fill-rule=”evenodd” clip-rule=”evenodd” d=”M8.223 19.078l.526.235c.99.44 2.09.687 3.251.687a8 8 0 10-8-8c0 1.162.246 2.26.688 3.25l.234.527-.55 3.851 3.851-.55zm-6.208 2.907l.846-5.92A9.965 9.965 0 012 12C2 6.477 6.477 2 12 2s10 4.477 10 10-4.477 10-10 10a9.965 9.965 0 01-4.064-.86l-5.921.845z” fill=”#000″></path></svg></button>9</a><a title=”pasito_tun_tun” data-report-pdt=”readerend” data-report-pdid=”23102006005984205″ data-report-l1=”1″ data-report-eid=”qi_A_heads” data-report-uiname=”heads” data-report-dt=”user” data-report-did=”4316481083″ href=”/profile/4316481083?appId=10″><span aria-hidden=”true”><svg viewBox=”0 0 1024 1024″ alt=”pasito_tun_tun”><path d=”M0 507.17a507.17 507.17 0 1 0 1014.34 0A507.17 507.17 0 1 0 0 507.17z” fill=”#BFC8FF”></path><path d=”M753.51 816.302C640 772.83 603.773 739.019 603.773 664.15c0-45.887 33.81-31.396 50.717-113.51 7.245-33.81 36.226 0 43.471-79.698 0-31.396-16.905-38.641-16.905-38.641s9.66-45.887 12.075-82.113c2.415-43.472-26.566-156.981-185.962-156.981S318.792 306.717 323.623 352.604c2.415 36.226 12.075 82.113 12.075 82.113s-16.906 7.245-16.906 38.641c4.83 77.284 36.227 43.472 43.472 79.699 14.49 82.113 50.717 67.622 50.717 113.509 0 74.868-36.226 111.094-149.736 152.151-115.924 38.641-190.792 79.698-190.792 108.68V1024h869.434v-96.604c0-28.98-74.868-70.038-188.378-111.094z” fill=”#F5F6FD”></path></svg></a>pasito_tun_tunLv4<svg></image></svg><a title=”pasito_tun_tun” href=”/profile/4316481083?appId=10″>pasito_tun_tun</a><span data-hvi=”true”><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg><span role=”presentation”><svg viewBox=”0 0 24 24″ fill=”none” width=”12″ height=”12″><path d=”M12 17.27L18.18 21l-1.64-7.03L22 9.24l-7.19-.62L12 2 9.19 8.62 2 9.24l5.45 4.73L5.82 21 12 17.27z” fill=”#000″></path></svg>The story is not bad in itself, the problem is that the author (or translator) changes the names of the characters. For example: Kohta is called Cat, Rei is Ray…. There are also very embarrassing parts of the story, it’s exactly Mc in the way he acts and talks with other characters, he looks like a beta SIMp with OP skills.
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